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Comments and observations about the construction of this MITA project webpage:
In general, the webpage is good. It is well-organized according to the assignment criteria and questions; the content of each page attempts to answer the basic questions for each area of the Moment-In-Time-Analysis. Sufficient work was put into researching the moment in time.
The areas for improvement include: (1) spelling, (2) grammar, (3) increasing detail among the various sections, (4) maintaining consistency in text formatting.
Spelling and grammar are bigger issues because they are so fundamental to college-level work; they simply should not be so consistently obvious. Increasing detail is a research and thoroughness challenge: either more research is required, or the research that was done simply needs to be included in the appropriate areas. Consistent formatting is a design skill that will improve with more practice, but it needs to be done for the sake of the reading audience.
As a FIRST MITA webpage, this page breaks ground for all the other groups, in all other sections. They receive Kudos for being the first and bravest! Congrats gang!
ADVISORY:
Attention all other groups, OBSERVE: learn well from what this group has done (or not done). |
